Musings of a 9 year old

There was a science lab down at the west end of Victoria Island . And inside was a portal that the scientists created. On the other side of the portal were tentacles, but the portal was closed. One day, the scientists noticed opening in the portal, but they thought it was a glitch and said it will be ok. Little did they know that the tentacles would be coming out soon. The next day the portal was still open, so the scientist started to get worried, but they didn’t really care . Suddenly all the tentacles came out and they got a mug of hot coffee and spilled it on the on a scientist, took the mug and went back in. Then the scientists all got scared and abandoned the lab. Then put security cameras in there to know what the tentacles were doing . After 2 years they figured out a freeze ray that would freeze the tentacles. Then they all went to the lab and waited for the tentacles. There was an alpha tentacle, which was in the middle of all of them. They decided to shoot that one first so the little tentacles would come and get him. They waited and they waited. After five hours The tentacles came out again. And then they shot the alpha with the freeze ray. At first the little tentacles got scared and went back in, but then they needed to save their alpha so they came back out and the scientists shot the rest of them very very quickly so they couldn’t get away. They decided to put the frozen tentacles in the museum to remember the victory. But little did they know the freeze ray would only last 10 years….

Stay tuned for part 2….

I asked my dad to ask ChatGPT to create an image for this story and this is what we got. . . It is almost exactly what I had in mind. so exciting…

7 responses to “THE MAD TENTACLES”

  1. vysakhpillai Avatar
    vysakhpillai

    waiting for part 2…

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  2. loved part 1…

    waiting for the next young writer… 🙂

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  3. Priyanka Sasidharan Avatar
    Priyanka Sasidharan

    Very nicely written. Waiting for part 2!!

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  4. H Devanarayanan Avatar
    H Devanarayanan

    Awesome ❤️

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  5. very good story ❤️

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  6. Your story is simply tenc-tastic and ink-credible! Brilliant imagination for a nine-year-old! Keep writing more wonderful stories! Eagerly staying tuned for Part II!

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    1. vaishnavivysakhpillai Avatar
      vaishnavivysakhpillai

      Thank you so much ! I am working on part 2 so it will be here soon….

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